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serenity blaze
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0 posted 2004-05-04 07:12 PM

Whereby wit such deviance
for sake of morsel'd variance
testing of the theories
a bit of that produces this
knowledge by experience--
a + b + c
concede--
"assume" she smiled
"result of 'd'--
makes an ass of 'u' and me."

Logic lacks the letter "e".
Sharpie and
the big red "F".

She sighed sadly, shrugging then--

"You failed what never was a test."

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Opeth
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1 posted 2004-05-04 07:56 PM

Original, witty and clever. Enjoyed!

ThisDiamond
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2 posted 2004-05-04 07:57 PM

Love makes these assumptions or none...depending on your view from the mountain or the valley. You be lilly here.
Smiles,
TD

Sunshine

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3 posted 2004-05-04 08:00 PM

Psstt...
think
"gold star"

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Canada eh.

4 posted 2004-05-04 08:34 PM

Here ya go!! Well done Ser!

Local Rebel
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5 posted 2004-05-04 09:43 PM

burn bay bee...

MGROVES

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6 posted 2004-05-04 09:56 PM

very clever

wranx
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7 posted 2004-05-04 10:15 PM

"What never was a test..."

Gads! Hows one to know!

Lubs ya, Karenity

Janet Marie
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8 posted 2004-05-04 11:56 PM

"You failed what never was a test."
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story of my life baby...

The ink bleeds through cuz you're paper thin
you're one more fool with a paper and pen
lookin for a poem in the water stains on the floor.

R.B.

Dark Angel
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9 posted 2004-05-05 12:26 PM

A very clever write Gorgeous,

"You failed what never was a test."

sooo very good.

Mxx

What are you my god? You touch me like you are my god
What are you my twin? You affect me like you are my twin.

Go Alanis!

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10 posted 2004-05-05 01:20 AM

I just went, "Ahhhhhhh."

then did it again when I read the Yeti.

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