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Earth Angel
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0 posted 2004-04-15 05:48 PM



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While driving down a country road,
With windows all turned down,
Fresh spring air, came rolling in,
As I merrily drove along.

I felt so free and happy,
With nary a care in the world,
Just rolling along the countryside,
Just being a country girl.

Horses were romping in paddocks,
Roosters were chasing hens,
Goats leapt white picket fences,
And pigs were rolling in pens.

Corn grew as high as the silos,
Steers were as big as a moose,
Sheep were as plump as pillows,
Fluffy bunnies hopped about loose.

The farm houses looked so inviting,
With tall elms lining each drive,
And seeds sowed lovingly in fields,
Became crops that flourished and thrived.

Fresh daisies were smiling in sunlight,
Field canaries came flitting by,
Wheat shafts were waving and golden,
Against blue, cerulean sky.

I saw pictures perfect as Rockwells,
As I passed down the country road,
I cast off the city slicker,
And donned a country mode.

I stopped at the edge of a forest,
And sat by an old oak tree,
I was humbled by its strength of presence,
And I let go ~ to simply "Be".

I became at one with my breathing,
Soon noting the ease of its flow,
Filling me with nature's essence,
An inner peace began to grow.
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© Copyright 2004 Linda L. Dowd - All Rights Reserved
Bonnie j
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1 posted 2004-04-15 05:52 PM


OH! May I come along on your ride down the old country road. It sounds so peaceful, so calming.I close my eyes and see the beauty and capture the aroma kissing the air.
Like this one. I do, I do.
Love Bon-Bon

Dark Angel
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2 posted 2004-04-15 05:52 PM


Lovely, I think I need to take a drive on a country road, and breathe in the fresh air.

Maree

Beauty of the world which is soon to perish has two edges, one of laughter and one of anguish, cutting the heart asunder.
(by Virginia Woolf)

JL
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3 posted 2004-04-15 06:30 PM


Beautiful poetry, and, Country Road!
JL

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
4 posted 2004-04-15 06:43 PM


OH!!  Next time take me with you!!  Pleeeease?!
Isn't today beautiful Linda??!
WHOOHOOO...Spring has arrived in Canada!
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

To have lived the dream of a love so true...
   is to have seen a glimpse of heaven.

Grover
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5 posted 2004-04-15 06:46 PM


Some good stuff here!
MGROVES
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6 posted 2004-04-15 07:06 PM


wish i was there too. i miss the long drives in the country. serenity yes


Martie
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7 posted 2004-04-15 07:42 PM


EA

Peaceful feeling in this poem...I hope the places you describe are real.  

Earth Angel
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8 posted 2004-04-15 09:50 PM


Bon-Bon ~

Welcome aboard! Hi ho! Hi ho! Off to the country we go! Farmer


EA

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9 posted 2004-04-15 09:53 PM


Dark Angel ~

Maree, the sights, sounds and smells of the countryside provide cures for all ails! ~ physically, mentally, emotionally and spiritually!
Flower

Country huggums,
EA

Earth Angel
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10 posted 2004-04-15 09:57 PM


JL ~

I love to sing and play my guitar to John Denver's song "Country Roads"!

~ and thank God I'm a country girl! lol
Tree 5
Country blessings,
EA

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11 posted 2004-04-15 10:01 PM


Nancy ~

Oh, yes! You most certainly must join me and our friends for a day trip into the country! I pack pretty scrumptious homemade picnics!
Yummy in the tummy good! Friends, fresh air, and fine food! Sounds like a plan!
RV

Country blessings,
Linda

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12 posted 2004-04-15 10:03 PM


Grover ~

Thanks! I like "good stuff"! lolPigtails


EA

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13 posted 2004-04-15 10:05 PM


MGROVES ~

Well, you must come along next time! The more, the merrier! We'll have fun in the sun and the fresh air!
Sunny

Country blessings,
EA

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14 posted 2004-04-15 10:09 PM


Martie ~

Oh, indeed they are real! ~ and all very much a part of me! You can take the girl out of the country, but you can't take the country our of the girl! lol Mind you, I have just now returned to the country!
Corn
Country hugs & good home cooking,
EA

JamesMichael
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15 posted 2004-04-16 06:17 PM


Lovely descriptive writing...James
Sadelite
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16 posted 2004-04-16 11:06 PM


I became at one with my breathing,
Soon noting the ease of its flow,
Filling me with nature's essence,
An inner peace began to grow.

The country has a way doing this!  Refreshing
and beautifully penned.  I'm going to put this in my library for a rainy day.  Loved it.  It is so me, so farm...
                Sade

iliana
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17 posted 2004-04-17 12:28 PM


Earth Angel -- can I come along, too?  I've got my bags packed....this was so enticing!   ...jo
GG
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18 posted 2004-04-18 06:38 AM


I knew there was a reason I needed a car...
err, and a license.
How about I just come along, too?
beautiful writing

Always, Alyssa

He was a man of sorrows
...I am a girl of tears.

Margherita
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19 posted 2004-04-18 10:15 AM


What wonderful feelings and images you share here dear Linda!
I have just been there with you.
And I breathe love and peace with you.
Just delightful!
Love, Margherita

garysgirl
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20 posted 2004-04-18 10:20 AM


I love country roads, don't you, Linda Lou?
Hugs to you, my sweet friend.  
Hugs,
Ethel Mae

Earth Angel
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21 posted 2004-04-19 11:05 AM


James ~

Aloha! Kind of you to say so, my island friend!
Tropical Island

Loves 'n hugs,
EA

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22 posted 2004-04-19 11:07 AM


Sade ~

I love that you "loved" it! ~ and it's nice to know that my poem is going to a nice home!
Duck

Warm hugs and a big smile,
EA

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23 posted 2004-04-19 11:10 AM


iliana ~

You would be a most welcome country companion!
Horsenion!

Country blessings,
EA

Earth Angel
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24 posted 2004-04-19 11:15 AM


GG ~

Good morning, Golden Girl!
Sun 2

Hop aboard, Dear One!

Mini Bus


EA

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25 posted 2004-04-19 11:17 AM


Margherita ~

~ "And I breathe love and peace with you"!!!
Dove 2Hearts


Linda


Earth Angel
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26 posted 2004-04-19 11:19 AM


Ethel Mae ~

As the late John Denver used to sing, "Country roads take me home"...
Family Road Trip

Luvvums,
Linda Lou

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