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Sunshine
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Listening to every heart

0 posted 2004-04-27 11:34 PM





Three Thoughts

This, the fourth night of the last series in
celebrating April – friends of friends
and family members enjoying a newly ascribed
poet in find…gold in the making…as
my granddaughter’s golden head lays on my lap,
from so many doings all month long, tired,
spent, but oh, yes,
a promised “promise” to next year’s April was given…
so much to look forward to…

~*~

April melded me in friendship, kinship,
waters on the glide, sun on the move;
a few days off to visit laughter and realize fun,
casting treasures into reality;
what price, these moments captured in more than
Kodaked frames?  Who can measure
thoughts transpired, when there is no weight,
yet, weigh heavy in the soul,
when there is
so much
love.

~*~

Finally, this ring.  
Found in those treasured moments,
its topazed blue lights gleaming,
it slipped on too easily, as if coming home, a long-lost
piece of time finding its innate cradle;
a birthstone connoting an ability
to increase one’s communication skills…

go figure…it is my own birthstone.  Set antiqued,
silver warming against my skin, it found
its home.  

Let the writings begin.

To April.  To friends.  To treasures.

Cheers.


© Copyright 2004 Karilea Rilling Jungel - All Rights Reserved
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Southern Abstentia
1 posted 2004-04-28 12:04 PM


*raising a glass -- here here
Fisherman
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2 posted 2004-04-28 12:08 PM


New Voice award
at the Caper's cafe,
Not a bad ending
to a pretty fine day.

My grandfather had a farm on the Smoky Hill,
downstream a bit, enjoyed the poetry and the picture.

passing shadows
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displaced
3 posted 2004-04-28 02:42 AM


Yes...cheers!
Dark Angel
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4 posted 2004-04-28 02:58 AM


Yes, let the writings begin

I look forward to them Karilea..cheers indeed.

Mxx

What are you my god? You touch me like you are my god
What are you my twin? You affect me like you are my twin.

Go Alanis!


Beki
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5 posted 2004-04-28 05:33 AM


these are beautiful, I felt like Iwas floating in that water as I listened to the cadence of your thoughts  very nice indeed
nakdthoughts
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6 posted 2004-04-28 06:10 AM


sweet words, Karilea...


M

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