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Setting Off This Flash
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Setting Off This Flash |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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Setting Off This Flash I am not good at faking it you make me feel like smoke that has been scraped too closely by fire and there I am just melted down to ash you think me strange but that would be so ordinary and I am not the least bit ordinary and in this world of so commonly average you too have special distinction the ability to be my spark |
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azblond Senior Member
since 1999-07-01
Posts 637The Steamy Desert |
Isn't it great to find that? And you have said it so uniquely... I would rather my words fall upon deaf ears than a closed mind... |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Sounds like quite a combination! Very cool writing!  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
two of a kind  |
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Amature2 Member
since 2001-01-08
Posts 416 |
1slick_lady, you have such a way with words. Thank You for sharing. |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Lucky is that man. Beautiful poem, slick one! One of the biggest missings of my near-exile here, is the missing of so many of your verses. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
Ah, inspiration -- I'm familiar with that -- glad you have some... and it's very bright too |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
nicely written Helen, as are all of yours.. like the new picture, too *s M |
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