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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA 
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If her hopes are all gone and her dreams cease to be what in life will she have to look forward to...... If the here of today is what she forever has with all the frustrations with no dreams to pursue If she listens to others when discouragement they bring telling her what they think she should ever do Telling her that everything is nothing...... just fairytales...... dreams that will never come true If she listens to others if her hopes are all gone if her dreams cease to be what in life will she have to look forward to...... Yes, IF.......... |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
they are the walls bouncing words hear if she must, but do not listen gee, your pretty ethel why did u hide so long? |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Excellent write Ethel... and yes you are SO pretty.... should have had a pic up long ago... Now I know who I am talking to!  Love ya lady~ To have lived the dream of a love so true... |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Ethel -- I think our dreams or imaginations are such gifts -- they help us survive -- this is what I got from your sweet, sensitive writing.  ....jo |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
If she listens to others when discouragement they bring if they can't be supportive, close your ears to them...  m |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
All I can say is, INDEED. |
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SimplyGold Senior Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453 |
Garysgirl, Yes, indeed. Follow your heart, it will show you the way! Lovely write. SG |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Yes, If! and, very well put - guess the only thing I could add is tell her to think for herself a little... and I agree with others here - - - heck, I agree all by myself ... you are pretty! Happy to see you, my friend, and always happy to read you. jwesley |
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