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waiting for you to love me.
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waiting for you to love me. |
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exhale Senior Member
since 2003-06-13
Posts 646Alberta,Canada 
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have you ever wanted to kiss me? with passion with feeling. i don't feel it,i don't see it. i've been waiting for the right moment to let you know i was here waiting for you to love me. waiting for you to need me. i'll be waiting a lifetime..won't i right now,i need you like a blind man needs a drunk driver. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
great ending line! |
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aujussy wolf
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan |
i liked the start , the end kicked my ass lol ( sorry about the lingo ) love love love , so much packed into one little word |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
appropriately terse.. no mincing of words... good Chelsea |
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azblond Senior Member
since 1999-07-01
Posts 637The Steamy Desert |
I love the last line! How true that often we know we are heading into a train wreck...but we still just want a glimpse... Let my words fall first upon deaf ears before a closed mind... |
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