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Mistletoe Angel
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0 posted 2004-04-18 07:00 PM


Rhytidectomy
(Warming Up To You)
By: Noah Eaton
4/17/04
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Hey you....
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...hey you...
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There used to be a time.
when I didn't believe in anything,
now I am so happy,
so happy I can scream,
adults are obsolete children,
but I've never felt so young,
the sun is up,
it's all permissive with your love,

Look at my brand new face,
look at your brand new face,
look at the brand new face,
you've formed on me...

I keep warming up to you,
you keep warming up to me,
I keep warming up to you,
you keep warming up to me.

Used to think His plan,
was some ostensible purpose,
now my declarations of faith run the gamut,
His song keeps me opulent,
Neptune retrograde,
has rid of the old and brought in the new,
I'm as spirited as a superball,
bouncing like a little boy in a cosmic zoo

Look at my brand new face,
look at your brand new face,
look at the brand new face,
you've formed on me...

A child needs love the most,
when he least deserves it,
so go on and spoil yourself.
Buck and wing,
and let your hair down,
you little Pomeranian.
Your love is my sweat lodge,
my shiatsu massage,
my favorite batik cloth.
It's in every silly charivari,
every Friday we go dancing,
and every reason I breathe

Look at my brand new face,
look at your brand new face,
look at the brand new face,
you've formed on me...

I keep warming up to you,
you keep warming up to me,
I keep warming up to you,
you keep warming up to me...


"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

© Copyright 2004 Nadia Lockheart - All Rights Reserved
BluesSerenade
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1 posted 2004-04-18 08:52 PM


the sun is up,
it's all permissive with your love,

Love this Noah!!
I'm so happy for you!  

passing shadows
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2 posted 2004-04-18 09:01 PM


kinda sing-songy...I like it
ThisDiamond
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3 posted 2004-04-18 09:52 PM


Sunrise lights your eyes Noah.
Smiles,
TD

azblond
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4 posted 2004-04-18 09:56 PM


I get it...and the melody keeps going on in my head...I love it!

Let my words fall first upon deaf ears before a closed mind...

MGROVES
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5 posted 2004-04-19 10:16 AM


nice to hear a happy tune this fine monday morn. thanks     marsha


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6 posted 2004-04-19 10:29 AM


I keep warming up to you,
you keep warming up to me,
I keep warming up to you,
you keep warming up to me...


Hi Noah  
what a happy and romantic song....
just how Gary and I do!! LOL  
Good to see you, my friend!!
With hugs and love,
Ethel



Grover
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7 posted 2004-04-19 10:40 AM


A real joy to read... you are truly a "warm up" guy, Noah!
Earth Angel
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8 posted 2004-04-19 10:53 AM


Thank you for adding a word to my vocabulary and for putting a song in my heart! Your happy face is contagious!

Keep warm! Keep smilin'! Keep happy!
Love you, Angel Boy!
EA


Margherita
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9 posted 2004-04-19 10:56 AM


Used to think His plan,
was some ostensible purpose,
now my declarations of faith run the gamut,
His song keeps me opulent,
Neptune retrograde,
has rid of the old and brought in the new,
I'm as spirited as a superball,
bouncing like a little boy in a cosmic zoo



This is no less than fantastic!
Love, Margherita

LeeJ
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10 posted 2004-04-19 11:11 AM


I'm as spirited as a superball,
bouncing like a little boy in a cosmic zoo


Tremendous visuals...very much enjoyed.

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