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Grover
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0 posted 2004-02-09 02:41 PM


Leap Frog


Afraid,
the frog always jumps forward
because that's where its safety is.

Afraid,
people always jump backwards
because that's where their safety was.


©2004 Grover Gall

© Copyright 2004 Grover Gall - All Rights Reserved
LngJhnAg
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1 posted 2004-02-09 02:50 PM


Grover - If I may add another verse?

Afraid
Scalawags always jump sideways,
Because they aren't safe anywhere.

Ya hear that Toerag and Balladeer?

dingusjr
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2 posted 2004-02-09 02:51 PM


You know I like your little snippets of
information......keep em coming.

Endlessecho
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3 posted 2004-02-09 02:51 PM


Wow.  That's really interesting.  Something to think about.  I think, perhaps, I'd like to jump forward.   

Thought-provoking write.

garysgirl
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4 posted 2004-02-11 12:04 PM


Grover, you are very observant.
I liked this. Let's send it back around!!
Hugs  
Ethel

iliana
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5 posted 2004-02-11 12:06 PM


Grover -- fascinating observation -- had never thought of this myself before, but you're right!  Enjoyed!
HopeS
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6 posted 2004-02-11 01:53 AM


Hey Grover ... how true ,
maybe this is why its takes awhile to move on in certain situations , you have it right here .... its fear

Hope

Youngatheart
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7 posted 2004-02-11 01:57 AM


Grover,
A big idea in such a tiny poem. *clapping*

passing shadows
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8 posted 2004-02-11 02:37 AM


awesome! the art of being human at its best!
JamesMichael
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9 posted 2004-02-11 07:08 PM


Nice...James
ice
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10 posted 2004-02-12 04:10 AM


Grover
Well done, this little poem arouses big thought....enjoyed
________ice
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11 posted 2004-02-12 04:13 AM


ditto ditto ditto


Sadelite
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12 posted 2004-02-13 12:08 PM


Grover,
   I loved this and wish it would have leaped from my keys!   Great thinking here.

froggy
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13 posted 2004-02-13 01:17 AM


Hello Grover,
   I like this. Its cute,made this froggy
smile.

Ribbits

:-)

NewEnglandlazurlu
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14 posted 2004-02-13 03:48 PM


Grover ... wonderful wisdom and it made me smile!

Nice job ... hugs, Marti

I take no credit for my poems. Although I write them, I feel
more like I transcribe them. It's just a matter of listening.


Seymour Tabin
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15 posted 2004-02-13 04:04 PM


Grover
Good write, enjoyed.

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