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LeeJ
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0 posted 2004-02-13 02:49 PM


Soft linen of death ordains me
Places I didn’t see or know
Merely a completion, for death is alive
Now caressing my bones
Treasury resides
In the heart of my essence
And the Father of my Church
Craftily interprets
Smooth believable simple things
Clothed in brass, mixing diamonds

I wonder if when we reference this purpose
Letting go for a while of all thoughts
Enjoining mental stimulation
And some good old fashioned enjoyment
do we self examine?
To avoid the abyss of lost madness, lost hopes
Patience sees all
Exposing the bogus

Which to us might be at the time, unknown?
For the sake of love, for the sake of that core,
It’s our charge to absorb & know
There is nothing that hides which
Will not been seen.
Building no pretenses or false dreams

How hungry are we, what are we looking for?
Others fabulously describe the passion
The restoration of extreme agony of mind
Sweetness resolves in this absolute thing
Without forming any difficulties

We must be within a substance of our own
Not conjured or overblown
But in accord with prudent forethoughts
Out of gratitude serves a countenance
Beauty of being, establishing a bright affirmation of rest
Reveals a kindly spirit, on which we all at first touch
Attending to each other, in expressing potentials
Considering the goals of their name
Rendering equal in desire to preserve order
Simple desires to investigate nature
In a kind way with no wishes to obtain
For their existence is as important & of the same
Doctrines we’ve known for years will blend and curve and smile
Listening to their grace, perhaps similar or equal
It is simply their generations passed on
I want to view you in the twelfth hour as I did in the first
Proceeding with no baseless speculations flowing forth
We will at times be separated in passions
With the flowing immensities of some doubt
But we can mold and birth an untimely parent
Sensible forms of progress
Which will once again reflect some light?
That we thought had forsaken us

I was left alone in the mist, in bewilderment
But now, I'll not be in love with falsehood
Where a liquid of substance derives its own fountain
I’m here from the tears and perspiration of misdirected hypothesis
My own….needs, do they match yours?

Without so much compromise…I wish to know your accord
Where are your thoughts tonight? What are your emotions?
Can my image be, what you’d always hoped it would be
I am from dust, from times of darkness and light
Melding me into something that I hope will bless your likeness
Can I walk with you towards your goals?
Will you stand by mine?
Are we fully acquainted with mother earth?
And how to make her shine?
An we, you and me, create our own world
Beginning with a free mind, with simultaneous inspirations
Rendering us at the same time?


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1 posted 2004-02-13 03:44 PM


I like this thought provoking write very much... particularly the last verse! *S*
Grover
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2 posted 2004-02-13 03:45 PM


Lengthy, yet excellent in every way as usual! Grover.
Seymour Tabin
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3 posted 2004-02-13 04:14 PM


LeeJ
Yes we are and we do.

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