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ThisDiamond
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0 posted 2004-02-07 11:12 PM


Despite the turn of pages, centuries in silken cages
A vital loss wept to be found
In noble cross still left uncrowned
As if the wind had scattered truth
Brown and littered songs aloof
This lineage by sisters made
Tread down the footpaths bended blade

Distinct the image sheathed in moon
Lingers spirit fraught the draft too soon
Fuller hips and candy lips
His fingers play in fumbled trips
Speak…the servants quarters shall be bleak
And scent is banished there
Into the cool white air

Until the night has coveted my eyes
Events that came to make me wise
And softness is not weak for wear
Nor timid could we speak or share
For born within the belly of creations fire
Her rightful place among God’s choir
Beside her man…beside and pure desire

An empress in the land of will
And can…I can be found and fair
Beside the might of what we share
Not in the less or least of call
But here beside, and hostess all
To do and make from give and take
Her robes illumined full and wake

His friend and lover
Kept kettle and cover
Strong and weak my soul to peak
The windblown slopes his eyes to seek
And warm like sunshine o’er the fields
The mistress to this banquet yields
The smile contented in his eyes

And love…a trickling force to bear
The well collected in her care
And bathed upon him ever so
To reunite the shine and glow
Of sun that sets upon his dine
And once forgotten then resign
Eclipse, the empty spots before the dawn

Copyright Kkh 2/7/04


© Copyright 2004 Kathleen Harris - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2004-02-07 11:43 PM




(smiles) Oh Kathleen, a woman's place like your own is by far one of the most special places ever, sweet friend, every child learns so much of lifes beauty from lying in the womb of a loving mother and touched by her gentle grace and love, yay! (big angel hugs) Yay, this is a treasure, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kathleen, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

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2 posted 2004-02-08 04:47 AM


a beautiful and much enjoyed write
Margherita
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3 posted 2004-02-08 08:27 AM


Once again I find your deep reflections and I am impressed by your talent of bringing them to paper in such beautiful poetic form.
Love, Margherita

inkedgoddess
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4 posted 2004-02-08 08:39 AM


pure poetry, romance, the gods and godesses
speaking through you

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5 posted 2004-02-08 09:31 AM


Kathleen~
There is a gentle ink within your thoughts~
You are such a remarkable writer and this stands as an excellent example of your ability to convey your thoughts so skillfully~

It is MY PLEASURE to read you endlessly~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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6 posted 2004-02-08 10:08 AM


You go girl!  Superb,  has such a feel to it
that would go well with the times...
Nicely done K.

Grover
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7 posted 2004-02-08 11:08 AM


A well disciplined write. Excellent!
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8 posted 2004-03-17 08:19 PM


i was wisped through every line, this is good TD!
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9 posted 2004-03-17 08:36 PM


Kathleen...it is my honor
to know a true poetess.

Thank you.

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