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time to wake
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time to wake |
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mysticpoe Senior Member
since 2003-02-28
Posts 883 |
When I died, I found myself weeping on the other side of your star. I was holding onto the dark side of caverns Holy, and all the sparrows who could still fly followed me. I knew it was you, You, from the beginning in that tower of talking colors. You in my window, I was knowing you. Now done, finitely quartered and dismembered from the touch of life. I once breathed and thought as horror and love defined balance and the moment, then. Here I’ll ask, Is it time to wake? If nothing is something |
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PKreturns Member
since 2003-07-21
Posts 362New Orleans, LA |
I really liked this poem. It was dark and cool and visual. Also i found it to be original too and thought provoking. |
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Krishankins
since 2002-06-23
Posts 972Texas |
VERY thought proviking!! As you have displayed in the lines here, dreams have no limits! |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
Excellent job! Creative imagery!  |
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mysticpoe Senior Member
since 2003-02-28
Posts 883 |
PKreturns, Krishankins and Grover, Thanks for taking the time to read and respond to this. I haven't been around for awhile, so I wasn't sure how this would fly in this forum? It was good to here from you all and thanks again for stopping by! Take care. wayne If nothing is something |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
enjoyed |
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