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Foxyoasis
Senior Member
since 2003-06-10
Posts 974
Atlantic Beach,Fla

0 posted 2004-02-06 12:17 PM


You want it all
my greatest love
you want it all
to yourself

you played with me
turned me inside out
and took my arms
from beneath my
feet

the clouds turning
the spells yurning
to envoke the spirit
inside your evil self

the catch 22 with your
eyes...oh..how they glisten
with false hope and blue
glass dreams

the ends of your lashes
your to tired to be
worrying about your
upcoming lashings

a balance the world
has it will pay the
dues of not just
your sins but
other's who you
abused.

© Copyright 2004 Julie O'Neill - All Rights Reserved
iliana
Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434
USA
1 posted 2004-02-06 12:49 PM


"the catch 22 with your
eyes...oh..how they glisten
with false hope and blue
glass dreams"

These lines were extraordinarily expressive!

Foxyoasis
Senior Member
since 2003-06-10
Posts 974
Atlantic Beach,Fla
2 posted 2004-02-06 01:08 PM


thank you

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....


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