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Tais
Member

since 2004-01-28

Posts 92
Ontario, Canada

0 posted 2004-02-03 02:46 PM

At one time,
a white canvas,
without form, no colours
a silence of nothing
over the pores of the cloth

Now softly dispersed,
dipped into brightness
a blue sky
spread in shades
different at each touch

Scattered in air
some dark green
and contrasted light
sprinkling nature
in transparent breeze

Unfolding warmth
in tender touch
the colour of flesh
in two bodies, two souls
united as one

Seedling of passion
granting the light
known only to hearts
carefully embraced
by God’s paintbrush

Whispering in verse
of present and future
in lyrics of love
eternally blessing
you and me.

steavenr
Member Elite

since 2003-11-17

Posts 4058

1 posted 2004-02-03 02:50 PM

you have painted the canvass of this word picture well...it was like looking over the shoulder of the painter as the painting took form...well done

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

2 posted 2004-02-03 03:39 PM

(smiles) Awwwwwwww, I love this, sweet friend, you are such a beautiful painter with poetry, yay, God Bless You, this brought a big smile to my heart, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Tais, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2004-02-03 03:40 PM

Very nicely penned and much enjoyed.
Hugs~

~ I like not only to be loved,
   but to be told I am loved ~

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

4 posted 2004-02-03 05:10 PM

Tais, I enjoyed this one very much. Please, tell me how I would pronounce your name?

Suetang
Member Ascendant

since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

5 posted 2004-02-03 08:01 PM

Hello Tais

This is the first poem of yours I have read and I enjoyed it so very much. Your words painted such a beautiful picture.

Take care.....Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

Grover
Senior Member

since 2004-01-27

Posts 1967
London, ON, Canada

6 posted 2004-02-03 08:11 PM

Excellent, well delivered! Grover.

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

7 posted 2004-02-04 02:08 PM

Whispering in verse
of present and future
in lyrics of love
eternally blessing
you and me.

Tais, this is a beautiful painting.

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