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First Love
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First Love |
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Kie Member
since 2004-02-01
Posts 77USA |
First Love I remember moonlit kisses Behind the Bradford Pear Pebbles missing windows Hoping parents weren’t in there Tip toes and rickety stairs A squeaky basement door Thinking I was a goner Seeing father standing there Sunday afternoons of freedom So young and so carefree The songs that were our anthem Not knowing responsibility Barbecues and croquet Evenings and setting suns Bored at all our birthdays Wishing we could run Bountiful are my memories When I think back on that time Falling in love, a rosy view When young and so agile I still remember my first love A landmark in my mind Memories, spellbinding Back to another time…. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
This is delightful, dear Kie. You made me remember those times too! Agile and carefree, ahhh yes! So lovely. Love, Margherita  |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
A wonderful tribute to first loves that linger in the heart. Beautiful! Eric |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Bountiful are my memories When I think back on that time Falling in love, a rosy view When young and so agile Beautiful writing, Kie. And, what would we do without our memories.  Hugs  Ethel |
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McLean Member
since 2004-01-05
Posts 484state of marital bliss |
Oh, Kie...this is a lovely thing, to rekindle similar memories in another! "First Love" was an amazing thing for the senses...If only we could live those moments over and over forever! Great Poem! McLean |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
oh yeah...I remember thank you for the reminder *big smile* |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
"still remember my first love A landmark in my mind Memories, spellbinding Back to another time…." Kie, this was lovely, and I have to agree with you that the first love is a landmark, for sure! |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Yes, one of my most endearing memories One that still warms my heart, after all these years... This was really special Kie Thank You! |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
Very well written. Brings back memories. Grover. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big angel hugs) Oh Kie, this made me cry as I still wait ever so much to feel first love as I've never gotten to hold a loved ones hand and get to feel loves first kiss and I believe it must be the most beautiful feeling in the world! (smiles) Yay, I'm so happy for you and I encourage you to always cherish these memories dear, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kie, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "You'll find something that's enough to keep you |
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