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Rockfish
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0 posted 2004-01-30 01:21 AM



perspective
narrows
as the eyes focus out

a little man
with a big heart
drove the cycle

      smiling,
but it was more than that

      (the creation of death)

accomplishments unseen
by the present tears
but
    felt
in bowed heads
turned inwards
     to voices
    that echo
in primal valleys

a bull roars
   a cow answers
       yes
  or
     no

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passing shadows
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1 posted 2004-01-30 02:48 AM


ok, I'm lost...I didn't get this one, but I am part blonde too, so don't sweat it.

anyhow Welcome to Passions

Mistletoe Angel
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2 posted 2004-01-30 10:01 AM






(smiles) Yay! Oh my gosh, I love your screen name, dearest frind, reminds me of the B-52's song "Rock Lobster", and I love to rock! (giggles) This is a wonderful contemplative debut, sweet friend, I love it! Welcome to Passions, sweet Rockfish, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your wonderful words, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Rockfish, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

garysgirl
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3 posted 2004-01-30 01:11 PM



KristieSue
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4 posted 2004-01-30 01:22 PM


Welcome to Passions!  You have mail!

"Painting is poetry which is seen and not heard, and poetry is a painting which is heard but not seen." ~Leonardo da Vinci

McLean
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5 posted 2004-01-30 02:35 PM


Interesting style and word choices, my friend.

Welcome to the forums!

McLean

ThisDiamond
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6 posted 2004-01-30 05:03 PM


Welcome to Passions.
Look forward to reading you.
ThisDiamond

Michelle_loves_Mike
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7 posted 2004-01-30 06:42 PM


Welcome to Passions
Unique style indeed
Michelle

I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike

1slick_lady
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8 posted 2004-01-31 07:02 AM


welcome to passions
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