Candyshoppe Fling (diabetics beware)

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Open Poetry #31

Candyshoppe Fling (diabetics beware)

J.Samm
Member

since 2004-01-12

Posts 415
Iloilo City, Philippines

0 posted 2004-01-29 07:59 PM

Candyshoppe Fling

So how's life, dear caramel?
Your eyes and hair of brown
Your gingerbread arms, they held me once
My trembling fingers in your hands.

Where's your sugar smile?
Those gumberry lips--don't hide them.
Sweet jelly scent I could smell from the Nile
And your voice as round as a pretzel.

wintertao
Member

since 2003-11-17

Posts 366
Okaloosa Island, FL

1 posted 2004-01-29 10:28 PM

kewl - loved the last line !

Sadelite
Member Elite

since 2003-10-11

Posts 2519

2 posted 2004-01-29 10:58 PM

I really liked the last line too!  Your whole poem was warm and enjoyable to read.
    Happy writing to you.
               ~Sadelite~

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