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LeeJ
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0 posted 2004-01-29 12:05 PM


Metaphysical wilderness, my Madison Avenue
Condensation of the spiritual body
Lectures me like Shakespeare
There is a mystic multidimensional society
Through which one functions sacred
Simultaneous realism
Central images of linear time, intuitive submission
Confirming a theater of the mind

I feel the overwhelming presence and its direct opposite
Achieved by the fusion of awareness
Between the conflicts of pure alchemy
Where children stride the grave
A greater reward of independence
Speaks to the human soul between birth and death

Vital, humorous and clear in a void of subterranean
Rare metaphysical imagery enormously divine
Giving way to the dreams of you,
A space where you are…in total symbolic expression
In the richest of mode…so multiple, so vivid
Of situational fact and level
You awaken my interior realm
One key stroke of movement, completely poetic
Passive consciousness, hanging onto my dimension
Your delicate fingers swarm my mind, in a happening shifting
And there a camel walks through, the eye of a needle
Free-flowing enigma, forthcoming & knowing!


© Copyright 2004 Lee J. - All Rights Reserved
Seymour Tabin
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1 posted 2004-01-29 01:06 PM


LeeJ
A keeper, enjoyed very much.

Mistletoe Angel
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2 posted 2004-01-29 04:40 PM




(big angel hugs) Yay! This reminded me so much of a scene I saw in "Smoke", a frame-narrative, where this shop-owner Auggie would always place his camera on a tripod out on the corner of two streets kitty-corner from his shop at 8 each morning in Brooklyn and take a picture of the same street corner each morning, and said to a friend, "It's my corner, after all. I mean, it's just one little part of the world, but things take place there, too, just like everywhere else. It's a record of my little spot. You'll never get it if you don't slow down, my friend." (big angel hugs) I guess any street we grow up on has that metaphysical glow to us all, God Bless You, live it each moment, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Lee, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton


"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

passing shadows
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3 posted 2004-01-30 02:39 AM


you are complex...very deep
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