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Open Poetry #31

thief

Snow

Senior Member

since 2000-10-16

Posts 1170
desert flower looking for rain

0 posted 2004-01-29 04:48 PM

thief

stolen by the salt
our shapes
once naked and bold
with grains of promise
embedded into artist ink

now washed off in vanilla
scented showers
and tomorrow
tomorrow

the rains will come and the foam
will only hint
of the shapes and secrets
of kisses spent

snow©'03

"...why does my skeleton pursue me
if my soul has fallen away?"
~p.neruda

Suetang
Member Ascendant

since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

1 posted 2004-01-29 05:14 PM

Wonderful imagery in this fabulous piece of writing.

Take care......Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

Richy
Member Elite

since 2003-05-03

Posts 3050

2 posted 2004-01-29 05:34 PM

This was excellent Snow!
I really enjoyed it.

Richy

Grover
Senior Member

since 2004-01-27

Posts 1967
London, ON, Canada

3 posted 2004-01-29 05:34 PM

Very nice writing. Perfect.

Wolf777
Junior Member

since 2001-02-28

Posts 20

4 posted 2004-03-01 12:50 PM

I love how you hint at things that only those who know you will understand.

M

dingusjr
Member

since 2003-09-24

Posts 415
Missouri

5 posted 2004-03-01 05:27 AM

Your poetry is always haunting and lovely..
and always enjoyed. THANKS.

KoKo
Senior Member

since 2003-02-15

Posts 995
Inside the shadow's shadow

6 posted 2004-03-01 02:02 PM

Loved this.

I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man.
--Chang Tzu

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