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Love's Only Key
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Love's Only Key |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
I hope this turns out right. It is called a concrete because it takes on the shape of the theme of the poem. Here goes... Lock- Smith, O, Lock- Smith, O, O, O, Do Lend Me A Key To Open my heart To love tenderly, Openly, fully, Lock smith,oh Lock smith, I Humbly do plead Answer my need For love’s O n l y Key |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
it is great...h |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
this is unusual, but enjoyable... i like this!  |
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KristieSue
since 2003-01-31
Posts 1460PA, US |
that was awesome...great job!! "Painting is poetry which is seen and not heard, and poetry is a painting which is heard but not seen." ~Leonardo da Vinci |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Wonderful!! Love this...I want to have a go at one. Hugs~E ~ Is that love I see in your eyes... |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Really sweet...the style supported the gentle simplicity of the write very well. Really enjoyed. TD |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Oh, how creative! Great! Chris "At one glance |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
Yes, this is wonderful in so many ways! Thanks for making me smile tonight. Patricia |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
Kind of like a poetry mechanic... Very ingenious! Grover. |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
1slick_lady, thanks…just trying out new styles (for me), but it didn’t turn out just like I had it typed…it was a little off muted, thank you…found this style on a cool site http://members.optushome.com.au/kazoom/poetry/concrete.html KristieSue, thank you for taking the time to read and comment Enchantress, I am glad you liked it…perhaps you could do one of those challenges (I see them in response, but have no idea where they come from) ThisDiamond, thank you…it seems once I started on it…it just turned out that way Nightshade, thank you…it was fun to write |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
Pat, always glad to help make you smile Grover, "poetry mechanic"? I like that...perhaps that explains how I keep getting font ink on my hands |
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jaicie114 Senior Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 750On the edge of forever |
This is just sooooo neat, steavenr...sorry...but, I sure hope you keep staying bored so you can keep looking for new styles of poetry to write! This is very entertaining and enlightening. Thank you! Love and Light...jc This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
awesome! just great work! |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
What an artistic piece...visually and emotionally.... WOW! ~ARH  love and hugs Open your eyes, open your mind, open your heart, let me come in and show you love.....~ARH |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big angel hugs) Awwwwwwwww, this is so original, sweet friend, and may your heart be opened up to the beauty of all the unconditional love you dream for! (smiles) God Bless You, sweet friend, love the shape, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Steaven, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "You'll find something that's enough to keep you |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Fascinating, this one! |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
I hope the key fits, and that your heart is set free... Totally Awesome. |
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