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garysgirl
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0 posted 2004-01-27 02:43 PM




~*~
Whisper
Sensual sound
Spoken very softly
Cause passionate feelings to stir
Heart Voice
~*~


(This was the first one of these I wrote. I love all these little verses.)


© Copyright 2004 Ethel GG Kent - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2004-01-27 02:47 PM


It's very pretty, Ethel!

~sky

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Hold on, it gets better than you know....
~Good Charlotte

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2 posted 2004-01-27 02:53 PM



This is lovely, Ethel...it whispers...smile

Love and hugs, lady...

"When the power of love overcomes the love
of power the world will know peace."
--Jimi Hendrix

scorpio
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3 posted 2004-01-27 03:08 PM


A whisper is a very private conversation.  Beautifully done Ethel.

believe in what your heart feels...

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4 posted 2004-01-27 03:16 PM


nicely done...I need to try this style...it appears challenging...and you did a great job of it
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5 posted 2004-01-27 03:25 PM


Lovely Ethel...most certainly a whisper.
Hugs~

    In the midst of winter..
I found there lives within me,
    an invincible summer.

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6 posted 2004-01-27 03:39 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwww, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, you always write the most beautiful gems, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ethel, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

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7 posted 2004-01-27 07:16 PM


As always Ethel, you capture the heart. Wonderful!!
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8 posted 2004-01-27 07:19 PM


Very,very nice Ethel. I have never tried one of these. But, after reading your little beauty....I just might give it a go. hugs, Chris

"At one glance
I love you
With a thousand hearts."


— Mihri Hatun, Turkish poet



    

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9 posted 2004-01-27 08:27 PM


heart voice.......very nice ethel, dear, very nice
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10 posted 2004-01-27 09:22 PM


I really liked the heart voice, too! I love this!

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11 posted 2004-01-27 09:30 PM


i am such a fan of short form and those who manage to get an ummmph! out of few words.

you did that and i'm happy to have read this.


snow

"...why does my skeleton pursue me
if my soul has fallen away?"
~p.neruda


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12 posted 2004-01-27 11:17 PM


I like the way she whispers my name...James
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13 posted 2004-01-28 02:41 PM


Oh, Ethel, how wonderful is this! Thank you!

Love and Light...jc

This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light.

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14 posted 2004-01-28 03:18 PM


This was very sensual Ethel!

Hot!!!!!

~ARH:heart
hugs and love

Open your eyes, open your mind, open your heart, let me come in and show you love.....~ARH

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15 posted 2004-01-28 10:43 PM


Oh I like that Ethel...
Heart voice.

Hugs,
TD

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