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Sudhir Iyer
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0 posted 2004-02-25 08:30 AM


step aside, you may step aside
there is no reason to fight
there is no shame in backing off
to have a rethink time-out

little arguments are healthy
as long as they remain little
differences of opinions
and if there is respect

but you see, the trouble is
perceptions differ
nobody knows for sure
what is little and what is not

after all, it is a world in which
my father is stronger than yours
and my mother is surely kinder
in this competion there is no winner

there is no reason to fight
step aside, you could step aside
whenever you possibly can
and figure out for yourself first

are you pushing the limits
or are you just deceiving yourself
and re-marking your boundaries
just to win the argument

step aside, you should step aside
yes, whenever you possibly can
make it possible even more
to do exactly that and know that

there is no big shame in backing off
after fight, sorry has no real gain
because, you see, life is porcelain
broken pieces impossible to mend

....
...
..
.


© Copyright 2004 Sudhir Iyer - All Rights Reserved
Seymour Tabin
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1 posted 2004-02-25 08:36 AM


Sudhir,
I agree, good write.

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2 posted 2004-02-25 10:19 AM


Yes, very wise words indeed.
Enjoyed this very much my smilin' friend.
hugs, Chris

"At one glance
I love you
With a thousand hearts."


— Mihri Hatun, Turkish poet



    

Gentle Spirit
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3 posted 2004-02-25 10:22 AM


Some very wise words you share with us this morn Sudhir, and very well written.  
Sunshine
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4 posted 2004-02-25 10:35 AM


there is no reason to fight
step aside, you could step aside
whenever you possibly can
and figure out for yourself first

are you pushing the limits
or are you just deceiving yourself
and re-marking your boundaries
just to win the argument

~*~

Gads...
you do have a way
of looking into the
heart of a matter...

Well done, my friend.

Brad Majors
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Georgia
5 posted 2004-02-25 10:54 AM


well done
Sudhir Iyer
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6 posted 2004-02-25 02:56 PM


thanks a lot, my dear friends...

regards
sudhir

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