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Turn to Whisper |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Shearing tantalized about the baste of magic Rich the linger of an ever surge welled in moonlight To be bathed, a resurrection of soul from dew and feather dust Taken, as a leaf in autumn blush, grown rugged in the slight of past But a spell to cast that takes the broken glass of hearts and glue A sweet reticulated fondle, cared and cherished, sought and flourished Entering the layers of sunset bestowed with colors of a final done Turning to the right, along the equinox of second hands rerun Wand of given grace along the curve of wisdom’s face And low upon the belly to be painted in extraordinary trace The wings of Monarch play and I am silk upon the speechless change Copyright Kkh 2/21/04 |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Oh, my goodness is this a keeper or what?!! Love this. hugs, Chris  "At one glance |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
And what an astonishing spell is cast! "Taken, as a leaf in autumn blush, grown rugged in the slight of past But a spell to cast that takes the broken glass of hearts and glue" Magnificent imagery!  .......jo |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice write  |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
To be bathed, a resurrection of soul from dew and feather dust Impressive imagery. Love and hugs. Margherita |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
this is such a good write...I think I shall go and indulge myself again and again in its excellent phrasings...extremely well done! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
oh...this is sweet |
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Ravenwolfvoyager Member
since 2003-12-25
Posts 326 |
Wow such a beautiful piece to endure. Kathy you have a way of flowing the words together and cating a beautiful imagery that is so thought provoking. Wonderful!! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
ThisDiamond For the poems moment you were a butterfly. Enjoyed |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Especially like your closing line! Superb! jwesley |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Rich the linger of an ever surge welled in moonlight To be bathed, a resurrection of soul from dew and feather dust Incredible, how you find such a blending of words, and create something such as this, such as these. |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
TD As usual mind blowing. Dave Sunset on the wings Magic as it sings Of image That it brings |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
Fabulous! Grover. |
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