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Open Poetry #31

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Robert Frazier
Senior Member

since 2003-02-06

Posts 1014

0 posted 2004-02-17 02:47 PM

When you fill my mind
thoughts never wander
but gather like clouds
of pleasure
pressing in on all sides
until the rains come
and wash all anxiety away
~
Purifying,
river of love
carry my passions
to the sea

Grover
Senior Member

since 2004-01-27

Posts 1967
London, ON, Canada

1 posted 2004-02-17 03:02 PM

Flows real nice... good work! Grover.

muted

Member Elite

since 2004-01-15

Posts 2949
Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving

2 posted 2004-02-17 05:56 PM

very nice

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2004-02-18 04:13 AM

hmmmm...that's very sweet

Sadelite
Member Elite

since 2003-10-11

Posts 2519

4 posted 2004-02-18 05:44 AM

Robert,
I really like this--I can visualize the warmly squeezed cloud pushing out the rain, purifying as it does. Very nice deep thoughts with a gentle visual flow. This one goes to thelibrary shelf so I can grab it later.
Take care, and have a great day, Robert.

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

5 posted 2004-02-18 06:57 PM

Excellent write RF!
Hugs~

  ~ Whatever our souls are made of,
      his and mine are the same. ~

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

6 posted 2004-02-21 01:17 AM

Nice work!

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