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kissa~rachelle
Senior Member

since 2003-11-27

Posts 988
nowhere special

0 posted 2004-03-25 08:49 PM

I dont know you anymore.
Three months gone by,
and you've changed so much.
SOme people use the metaphor,
"like a flower blossoming"
for you,
I prefer
"Like a flower slowly dieing."
You are bitter towards me,
every word out of your mouth is critical.
"You take things too seriously"
"You sound just like my mother!"
Then, when you want something,
" oh, I love you kissa"
"I'm so sorry"
I'm tired of you bi-polar attitude.
It confuses me.
I stick up for you when people bash on you,
I never judge you because of your choices,
I love you.
You are just too blind to see it.

You say you love me too,
but you dont.
You use me,
and you dont realize how much it hurts.
I have cryed over you soo.. many times,
and you know it.
but you are too selfish to care,
to care about anything but yourself.
I want to just leave,
never see you again,
but i cant.
There is always going to be
a part of me that loves you,
and no matter that i do,
i can never let that part of me go.

I want a relationship i can finally sink my teeth into.~ Alexander Sterling

loner187
Member

since 2004-03-21

Posts 106
Upstate New York

1 posted 2004-03-25 10:57 PM

Wow. This is really beatuiful, even though it's about a guy using you and not really loving you like he says. Awesome. I feel the pain your going through all throughout the poem. Great, I wouldn't change a thing.

-Amanda

"Love doesn't make the world go 'round. Love is what makes the ride worthwhile."
-Franklin P. Jones

WinterWren
Senior Member

since 2002-12-01

Posts 1044
...Coming to

2 posted 2004-03-26 04:42 PM

Beautiful poem, expressed perfectly.
I really felt all your emotions in this, I hope the situation gets better for you soon.
Thanks for sharing.

W.W.
We were meant to live for so much more have we lost ourselves?
Maybe redemption has stories to tell maybe forgiveness is right where you fell.

Lexy
Senior Member

since 2003-01-28

Posts 1038
California

3 posted 2004-03-26 06:09 PM

this is a good straight forward approach.
I felt your frusterations...

*Alli4000*

Member Elite

since 2004-03-21

Posts 3188
The World of Poetry

4 posted 2004-04-04 08:07 PM

Wow. This poem is really deep. I agree with everyone else when I say that I can feel all your anger and disappointment.
I loved your poem, even though it was about bad experience, because you were able to express your emotions very well. Can't wait to read more of your poems.

Christioned
Member

since 2004-01-15

Posts 93
Huddling in the dark

5 posted 2004-04-05 08:07 PM

I curently have a friend exactly like what you describe in your peom. It hurts me like how you describe. Thank you. It's great that someone can put what I've been through for three years in words when I couldn't.

Juju
Member Elite

since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

6 posted 2004-04-05 11:51 PM

Yeah... some people change just to radical for me or others to handle.);

Juju

Deep_Inside
Member

since 2002-02-14

Posts 377
i can't stop hiding

7 posted 2004-04-06 03:22 AM

the emotions displayed in this poem reminds me of butterfly, overwhelming beauty with out the brain to realize it. I’ll make shore to send some good vibes your way, my condolences...keep writing

when you live you begin to die
when you die memories of you life lives in others
when memories of you begin to fade
you truly begin to die

Sweetpoet16m4u04
Member

since 2002-11-10

Posts 153
Ma, U.S.A

8 posted 2004-04-06 06:55 PM

Hey Kissa hun,
First of all im going to start this reply off with giving you the biggest hugs someone can possibly give for writing as deep as this!! As a guy i know all about the **** we put sweet precious heaven sent angels like yourself through!! The whole using the l word to get what they want its beyond unfair to the girl who actually has feelings for that guy. I just want to let you know that if that guy is treating you that bad he totally doesnt deserve someone as great as you in his life thats for sure. You need someone thats going to be there for you through all the bad times in your life as well as the good hun. That guy will be able to sit down and talk with you for hours even if he has no interest in what ur talking about, sending you flowers just because he wants to see you smile, you know the lil things that no guy actually takes into consideration and displays. Thats how i feel a girl needs and should be treated. And just something to think about when you find that guy make sure they say they like you and consider you their best friend before jumping to that word "love" because then and only then you will know that guy is someone special.

Lots of Love girl,
Chris

Spine Grinder
Senior Member

since 2000-10-28

Posts 1127
Standing In Silence...

9 posted 2004-04-08 08:05 AM

I liked this, I'm sorry you had to go through this, or are still going through it, either way, it sucks. But well done on the poem.

"I...I bleed...For no one..but myself...For me and no one else!"~ MudVaYne

xno4everx
Junior Member

since 2004-04-08

Posts 14
NY

10 posted 2004-04-08 04:17 PM

whoA..this is a really great peom and as everyone said before, your emotions really spill out when youre writing..im looking forward to some more pieces =]

//..Two souls with but a single thought, two hearts that beat as one..\\

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