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Teen Poetry #7

The third corner

Lexy
Senior Member

since 2003-01-28

Posts 1038
California

0 posted 2004-02-15 10:49 PM

I can't equalize or parallel how my skin does tingle at the touch of nothing.
Every word is upon the air, and it disgusts me.
Embarrassment strikes my face hard, and my skin is raw with a reddish ting.

Every eye wanders and refuses to connect.
Strange how this empty smell brings a heavy gas into my chest.
Shrink then swell.
Pathetic pink lungs.
They witness how weak I have become.

Because of your beautiful eyes.

A shadow of your hand hangs on my wall
and I trace my fingertips along the obscure image.
I'm folded into many corners by these pressuring hands.
So different from yours.
Soft like something other then this...
This ragged tattered skin I walk inside.

BrokenDreams
Member

since 2003-02-09

Posts 425
In The Clouds

1 posted 2004-02-16 10:39 AM

whoa...this was really deep. I felt it on a level that I usually don't see. This was very powerful, thanks for the read.
Jen

Whoever said "Tis better to have loved and lost than to have never loved at all" obviously never loved.

kissa~rachelle
Senior Member

since 2003-11-27

Posts 988
nowhere special

2 posted 2004-02-16 05:34 PM

Wow. Very Deep. I love it.
~Vampire Kisses

I want a relationship i can finally sink my teeth into.~ Alexander Sterling

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