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Teen Poetry #7

Winter Chill Here at Home

young_blood
Senior Member

since 2003-09-19

Posts 1115
Indianapolis, IN

0 posted 2004-02-15 05:44 PM

Winter Chill Here at Home

Winter eyes watch snowflakes die
With Season's breath leaving again.
Secondhand tears always seem to lie
Playing on your cheeks when it can.

Winter nights freeze our verbal fights
With our breath taken from us again.
Shining stars and bright aura lights
Spotlight the new beginning and fading end.

Winter days slowly fade the night away
Taking our worries from the heart again.
I'm praying for your eyes to stay
Looking down into mine, my beautiful friend.

Winter's kiss, one that i already miss,
Something just so brief to only want again.
I'll ignore what i know to be amiss
And press my lips to freeze to yours again.

now im alone, but not lonely like before

Lexy
Senior Member

since 2003-01-28

Posts 1038
California

1 posted 2004-02-15 10:39 PM

now that was beautiful.
my god, it was so touching.

"Secondhand tears" -such a unique perspective.

"I'll ignore what i know to be amiss
And press my lips to freeze to yours again."
That was just so...beautiful.

I'm saving this.
I like how it made me feel.
~Lex

kissa~rachelle
Senior Member

since 2003-11-27

Posts 988
nowhere special

2 posted 2004-02-16 01:48 PM

This was.. really really awesome. I love your poems. They are so deep and passionate. So, beautiful. I cant wait to hear more. I am saving this too.
~kissa~

I want a relationship i can finally sink my teeth into.~ Alexander Sterling

young_blood
Senior Member

since 2003-09-19

Posts 1115
Indianapolis, IN

3 posted 2004-02-16 09:19 PM

thank you both so, so much.

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