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Spine Grinder
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since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127
Standing In Silence...

0 posted 2003-11-30 06:17 PM



These walls grow steeper,
As you try to get closer.
I can’t help it,
I have to protect myself now.

I can never be vulnerable,
I can’t let you get in.
I can never let you see,
How to get under my skin.

I guess it’s time to tell you,
You can try as hard as you want,
But I won’t allow you to change me,
So you can just quit now.

I can’t allow you inside these walls,
So you could just tear them to the ground.
I’m simply closing you out,
What goes around, comes around.

‘Cuz you haven’t seen,
What you did to me.
You never will either,
So just give up now.

So many memories,
Locked up inside,
I’ll never let go,
Of how much I cried.

I can’t be in your presence,
It’s too intoxicating.
The very sight of you hurts,
So I’ll leave now.

Call me a coward,
I no longer care.
I don’t care if you’ll miss me,
Life isn’t always fair.

I soak up all the pain, and accept it in silence~DMX

© Copyright 2003 Staci Weidner - All Rights Reserved
frolicking dolphin
Member
since 2003-02-23
Posts 268
my own special world
1 posted 2003-12-02 05:52 PM


I can't believe that no ones replied to this, I thought it was really good, I've felt that way with many people before in my life but I haven't broken down yet, nice write

~*~Karen~*~

~All our dreams can come true, if we have the courage to pursue them~Walt Disney

kissa~rachelle
Senior Member
since 2003-11-27
Posts 988
nowhere special
2 posted 2003-12-02 05:56 PM


I really loved your poem. One of your best i have to say. I have felt like that a lot lately. Sometimes you just have to let go, just like you said. I cant wait to read your next poem.
~**kissa~**

broken627
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since 2003-11-26
Posts 66
Eugene Oregon
3 posted 2003-12-05 06:40 PM


Beautiful!I love it!your so talented care to share some of it~?!
-*--broken627-*-

Riley
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in the pouring rain
4 posted 2003-12-05 07:04 PM


quote:
I can’t be in your presence,
It’s too intoxicating.
The very sight of you hurts,
So I’ll leave now.


this hits close to home...i loved it..it almost made me cry...

*ri

* the pouring rain kisses my lips with innocence as you look into my eyes *

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