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Sunder in the ambiance
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Sunder in the ambiance |
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Tempest Member
since 2006-04-28
Posts 247dont eat paint chips!!!! 
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Sunder in the ambiance Is all you can do Ive been stabbed in the back And betrayed by you I can feel it, So deep it dwells It starts to writher Then it swells Anger feeds This twisted beast This demon inside And all of a sudden Im blinded with rage Because I was played a fool On this wicked stage I start to swing And you go down You just lay there Without a sound I knew it would happen One of these days You would step up.... Only to fall, flat on your face |
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mgoodman1989 Member
since 2006-03-05
Posts 93Iowa, USA |
Awesome, Can totally relate... Nice Job! My favorite stanza is the last, Much love, Michelle |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
i liked this it had a nice flow  hope to read more soon:Phunnie* A true friend is someone who reaches for your hand and touches your |
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the_girl_next_door Senior Member
since 2006-02-26
Posts 591USA |
Wow.. i really liked this.. kinda morbid.. great job ~heather~ Desire nothing except desirelessness. Hope for nothing except to rise above all hopes. |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
Wow, I really liked this one by you. Very nice. Keep posting! ~Alli~ |
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