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0 posted 2003-11-08 01:15 AM


“Two Lovers Sharing One Heart”
(8/11/03)

Living all alone,
Living all unknown,
Without the Knowles of your light,
It just wouldn’t be alright,
When two lovers sharing one heart.
You’re my “Nothing Hill,”
You’re my doll, my thrill,
The one who makes it all OK,
Each moment of everyday,
When everything’s falling apart.

Someone must believe,
Really hard in me,
To pass me such a miracle,
Shaped just like you beautiful,
We’re two lovers sharing one heart.
I’m your compliment,
I’m your confidence,
Your support, honor and respect,
I’ll pull you from the wreck,
When everything’s falling apart.

You’d be my bread and water
If I was locked up for life
I’d take care of the household
If you were to be my wife
You’re as sweet as a puppy,
Though as tough as nine inch nails
If I was a bode you’d be
The only place I’d set sail.

Living all alone,
Living all unknown,
Without the Knowles of your light,
It just wouldn’t be alright,
When two lovers sharing one heart.

It’s going to be alright,
When two lovers sharing one heart.
It’s going to be alright,
When two lovers sharing one heart.
When two lovers sharing one heart…

© Copyright 2003 Brian Eggertsen - All Rights Reserved
garysgirl
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1 posted 2003-11-08 01:20 AM


Brian, I really like this poem.
It sounds like a song. Is it?  
Hugs  
Ethel

dertah
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since 2003-06-18
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2 posted 2003-11-08 04:41 PM


what if its not alright?
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