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smalltownmind Junior Member
since 2003-10-24
Posts 21 |
Here's one of our newer songs...also should be online soon. Dave by Small Town Mind magazines and TV screens telling you what you should be it's hard to feel it's hard to believe. in a world of black and white if it's not wrong then it's not right you've gotta find some place to hide. (prechorus) Then i see you coming along... saying everything is wrong... gotta make them belive that you're strong enough to carry on... Don't sell out you won't buy in this is where your life begins gotta avoid the bitter end you've gotta try again.. (chorus) Don't give up... there's another day there's a million ways to get it right (you're gonna get it right) Get back up it's just another heartache just another heartbreak it's nothing that can't be undone... it's not the first time you've been down this road...your soles are worn... your soul is torn. Now it's time to stand up gotta fight to stay up. Don't let anyone push you around... (prechorus) (chorus) (bridge 1) here you are again standing at a bridge and you see yourself on the other end.... (bridge 2) I know that...you won't miss her when she goes and I know that you'll move on.... this song is kind of strange just to read the lyrics...it's highly dependant on the music because of all of the guitar soloing in it (our guitarist is amazing) anyhow...that's it. "if you want me back...you're gonna have to ask." |
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BrokenDreams Member
since 2003-02-09
Posts 425In The Clouds |
I really enjoyed this. It's good as a poem without music, so I'm sure that it's awesome with music. Thanks for the read. Jen I hate what I've become to esacpe what I was. |
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dertah Senior Member
since 2003-06-18
Posts 584 |
rooty tooty fresh and fruity.....good write. |
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infinite disaster Member
since 2003-06-01
Posts 69Illinois |
good write! i really like these lyrics ... it's not common for me to find some poems i like anymore ... lol ... so keep up the good work! much love, akie. I am proof that the heart is a risky fuel to burn. |
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