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red_angel*16
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since 2004-09-04
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0 posted 2004-09-09 05:32 AM


i wrote this poem about
my ex-boyfriend cause he always tells
lies to every one.

you tell the guys that I'm yours even though
I'm not. I'm freaken tired of you spreading
rumors, telling lies, and being an (edit)!!!
you dont own me and you'll never will
I'm not just one of your toys
So just shut the (edit by moderator) up and move on

Dont say I cant go out with other guys
Dont tell me what to do
Dont tell me what to say and
Dont try to change me in any ways

I dont tell you what to say
I dont tell you what to do
I dont try to change you, so
just let me be myself thats all I ask of you
I'm still young and I love to be young
I'm free and I love to be free
I want to be young to live my life while I still can
I want to be free to say
and do what ever I please to do
So please dont say you own me cause you dont...



[This message has been edited by SEA (09-09-2004 10:02 AM).]

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aussie teen
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since 2003-09-27
Posts 396
Australia
1 posted 2004-09-09 09:55 AM


i love your poem.... and i know how b/f like this can be.....
love the way you have expressed your emotions...
keep up the writing...
Ruth

live life as if your going to die tomorow....... but love as if your going to live forever......

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