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I'm ready to strangle myself.But I am so loved by everyone.
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I'm ready to strangle myself.But I am so loved by everyone. |
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Sweetest Sorrow X Member
since 2004-01-19
Posts 146From a cradle to a casket 
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I'm striving for anything to pump my heart out of my chest; anything I could weep over I want so badly to become human again to feel one more breath layed on my neck . It's my secret wanting; like a song I can't keep from humming. I need something, someone.. anyone to show me life. I would give anything to feel alive. I will wait for you tonight. Come my love clear my mind. Fix my back Kiss my eyes wish not to see ever again Hold my hand guide me and walk with me one last time. Hush my darling don't tell a lie Saying nothing leads to silence for silence was always my comfor you will always be my deafening pleasure. I believe that lovers should be tied together and thrown into the ocean in the worst of weather and left there to drownin their innocence |
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TheGirlNoOneKnew Member
since 2003-12-04
Posts 92PA, USA |
Your poems are always eloquently sad and this was no let down. Beautiful writing.  |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Your title caught my eye, and the first line of this made me nod real hard. A great honest opening of spirit here--and yea, I'm in agreement here, how difficult a testament it is to follow, and yet the yearning is an elipses... This has the integrity of honesty and that...I always appreciate. Enjoyed. |
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skyshine 
since 2002-02-07
Posts 3058Beneath the northern stars |
Your writing is very intese in its sadness. Keep up the good work!  ~sky Hold on, if you feel like letting go |
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