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tapper798
Member
since 2003-07-20
Posts 353
My own world

0 posted 2004-08-28 04:05 PM


Rainy days,
cloudy skies,
a windowless world.
I can't look out
into my life.

It's not that easy.

I can't be the viewer.
I can't look
into my life
and say
what the simple alternative
looks like.

It's not that easy.

I have to be inside
the picture,
watched within.
I have to feel the
hurt
pain
love
emotions
and all that can't
always be seen
from the window;
can't be seen by the viewer.

I can't stop the rain,
before it falls on me,
to escape
to the safty of
a window
to watch it fall
from
the inside,
avoiding all that is involved.

It's not that easy.

Love is giving him the ability to break your heart...but trusting him enough to know he won't.

© Copyright 2004 Erin - All Rights Reserved
kissa~rachelle
Senior Member
since 2003-11-27
Posts 988
nowhere special
1 posted 2004-09-04 01:54 PM


I cant beleive no one has replied to this yet!!! Grrr...i hate it when that happens.

Very amaizing write. It is absolutely unbeleivable that no one replied to this.
I cant wait to hear more.

Karissa

I want a relationship i can finally sink my teeth into.~ Alexander Sterling

dodge_chick2003
Member
since 2004-01-18
Posts 136
California
2 posted 2004-09-04 04:04 PM


I agree with Kissa yet again, why dont people respond to all the good ones. Keep it up
*Alli4000*
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since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188
The World of Poetry
3 posted 2004-09-04 06:29 PM


How did I miss this?!? I can't believe I did!
Well...better late then never.

This poem was great! I loved it! I'm going to add it to my library.

~Alli~

*:.AIM = Alli4000.:*
Don’t cry because it’s over, smile because it happened...

tearsoflove13762
Member
since 2004-09-05
Posts 488
Texas.. and yes i have an accent
4 posted 2004-09-05 03:18 AM


wow this was great! it painted mental images in my head of what you were describing! i cant wait to hear more of your stuff!
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