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Stepharoo
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since 2004-05-04
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Washington, USA

0 posted 2004-06-24 02:47 AM



First it was you and I, who began to vanish.
And so quickly we did, but now we are friends again.
But now it’s our other friends who look like they aren’t going to last.
We are all falling apart very slowly but also to fast.
I can’t keep up with it all; we are all beginning to fall.
Friends aren’t supposed to treat each other like this!
No not at all.
I don’t want us to break what I thought was so strong.
I want all this fighting to stop! Please this isn’t how things are supposed to be done.
We can’t let go; we can’t give up,
I just wish we could all grow up.
Come on, I thought we were older than this.
Why cant we all just get along!
Aren’t we better than this?
Its no ones fault, just to many misunderstandings.
We need to just let go and MOVE ON!
It’s killing me that we cant just sit and laugh,
Talk like we used to.
But one wrong word can turn us bitter!
I wish I had the nerve to speak up,
I don’t know why I can’t.
We are all friends, so I’m told.
So why is this so hard?
I don’t know; I wish I could be told.

This is to my Friends! None of us are getting along right now and its getting old....I didnt mean for this poem to be good...Im just telling how I feel. I hope you enjoy...Thanks

© Copyright 2004 Stephanie M. - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2004-06-24 05:36 AM


wow so much feeling in this one! really good work!

hi my name is robin and i am addicted to poetry and matt!
cody saw some pigs so he tried to fly but he fell and went BOOM!

sweet_cute_palestinian04
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since 2004-04-11
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Earth
2 posted 2004-06-24 12:14 PM


this is a veryy great poem keep it uo,,i really enjoyed it,,,,,greattttt sis
lo9ve and respect peace

I hate the world because it does'nt have a taste, i HATE the world because it does'nt have a color.!!
Admit that im right,,!

blackandwhitehorizon
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since 2003-05-05
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an akward state of mind
3 posted 2004-06-24 08:54 PM


Aw I really like this i even like how it sounded... but mainly because the same thing is happening with my friends right now... thanks for sharing

"love is but a song we sing and fear's the way we die"

SwEeTnSeXy18
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since 2000-09-18
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nc
4 posted 2004-06-29 11:59 PM


I hope things work out for the best! In the meantime just try to be patient but if you feel it will help then do speak up.
Lisa

~in order to gain, you have to lose~


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