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C_ROK06
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0 posted 2003-10-23 04:42 PM



I say that I don’t care
I don’t care what you say
Everything from now on is going to be done
My way

My way
I know what is best for me
I don’t need to be watched over
I don’t need your guidance
Just turn around and walk away

Walk away
Leave me here
In my own despair
My own guilt
My own grief
I don’t want you here
I don’t need you

Go now
Leave
Let me be
I need to think
Your words and thoughts are suffocating me
I hear them all in my mind
No clarity
No sanity
No peace of mind

Stay away
Don’t come near
Leave me with my mind
My thoughts
My feelings
My fears
Let me take my time
And do things my way

[This message has been edited by garysgirl (10-27-2003 11:26 PM).]

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dertah
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1 posted 2003-10-23 04:51 PM


good onnnnneeeeeeeee......my way
C_ROK06
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2 posted 2003-10-24 05:19 PM


haha. there's more to it than that, but yeah... my way. haha. my way. ^_^
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3 posted 2003-10-27 11:25 PM


Victoria, this is a good poem.  
Hugs  
Ethel

C_ROK06
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4 posted 2003-10-28 07:55 PM


I actually wrote this poem when i was upset, when i was going through so much that it seemed to overwhelm me. And having great friends, they all tried to help, but i wanted to be left alone. sometimes all a person needs is to be able to sit be ones self and think over things. I am very gratefull to my friends who where there, waiting to catch me when i fell, VERY thankfull. but during this time, i had that "i can do it all myself" attitude, and some of my other poems tell exactly what happend as a result...

" So let us then try to climb the mountain, not by stepping on what is below us, but to pull us up at what is above us, for my part at the stars; amen

[This message has been edited by C_ROK06 (10-28-2003 07:56 PM).]

C_ROK06
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since 2003-10-23
Posts 49

5 posted 2003-10-28 07:57 PM


I actually wrote this poem when i was upset, when i was going through so much that it seemed to overwhelm me. And having great friends, they all tried to help, but i wanted to be left alone. sometimes all a person needs is to be able to sit be ones self and think over things. I am very gratefull to my friends who where there, waiting to catch me when i fell, VERY thankfull. but during this time, i had that "i can do it all myself" attitude, and some of my other poems tell exactly what happend as a result... like the one "i'm gone" was a result.

" So let us then try to climb the mountain, not by stepping on what is below us, but to pull us up at what is above us, for my part at the stars; amen

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