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tapper798
Member
since 2003-07-20
Posts 353
My own world

0 posted 2004-05-15 04:37 PM


Friends should never hurt,
friends should never lie,
but you've broken both these things,
you have made me cry.

Not tears of happiness,
not tears of joy,
not even tears of something
happening with a boy.

Tears over hate and sorrow
built up inside.
Things you never told me,
things you decided to hide.

I find out everything
that you have to say,
shaking, crying, choking,
how could you hurt me this way.

We were supposed to be
each other's best friend,
the one person I could trust,
even to the end.

But your words have stung my heart
my trust in you is gone,
I can't believe you're the
person, I trusted so long.

I can't stop crying now,
the tears keep coming back,
it's a never ending stream
of something I now lack.

I still can't believe
you would hurt me so bad,
I'm sorry this had to happen,
I'm sorry we lost part of what we had.

-Erin

I got a horrible email from my best friend and it really upset me, I couldnt' stop crying so I wrote this, I feel alittle better now. Sorry, pretty much venting..hope you like it.  

"If ever you think of me out of the blue, just remember it's all the kisses I've blown in the air finally catching up with you!"
  *~Erin~*

© Copyright 2004 Erin - All Rights Reserved
yankees01rugby
Junior Member
since 2003-08-13
Posts 48
USA
1 posted 2004-05-15 10:36 PM


i like this. im so lucky that this hasnt happened between my frind and i. im sorry to hear it did happen to you

"What your mind believes, your body will achieve. Its time to start believing."

sweet_cute_palestinian04
Member
since 2004-04-11
Posts 418
Earth
2 posted 2004-05-16 01:08 AM


wow woow wow ...awesome keep it upp..i love ur poemsss soooooo more......love and respect sis


peace

I will cover you with my blood,not only because
i love you but because your are the one that turned my blood a color....

kissa~rachelle
Senior Member
since 2003-11-27
Posts 988
nowhere special
3 posted 2004-05-16 01:19 AM


I know what you mean.. she must have wrote some horrible things. I am sorry for what you have loset, but atleast now you now.
kissa

I want a relationship i can finally sink my teeth into.~ Alexander Sterling

aussie teen
Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 396
Australia
4 posted 2004-05-17 07:12 AM


the saem thing happened to me but i found out at school from someone i dint even know saying are you the chick thats fighting ..... today....????? so yeah that was pretty bad... but i love the way you have got your emotions out here and i hope you can work it out with your friend...
keep up the writing even if its venting keep it up.
Nice work... Mel

so this is me but what do you care about that????
i am who i am. no one can change that but me, even then it will be a fight to the death

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