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American Dream |
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Don_Juan Member
since 2004-04-08
Posts 252Far from where I am going 
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American Dream Sudden flirtations chanting words that are never sincere drunken phrases intoxicated slurs never walking that straight line stumbling left stumbling rigth lead me on into your bed of distrust black widow maneater pick apart the unsuspecting for your own fun take advantage get all of the gold that you've dug for so you can be praised by society for you've finally achieved their american dream eh it's kind of short but i had to write it quickly for a class. I had no time whatsoever to develop it more. Well i hope you like and please give me some feed back nice use of muffin |
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tapper798 Member
since 2003-07-20
Posts 353My own world |
I thought this was really good. It had alot of bitterness to me, not a bad thing. Good job. "If ever you think of me out of the blue, just remember it's all the kisses I've blown in the air finally catching up with you!" |
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