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sweet_cute_palestinian04
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since 2004-04-11
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0 posted 2004-05-09 01:05 AM



camping in the forest,
hearing birds singing my name,

looking ssoo suprised and thinking of god ,how did he make  them soo sweet and so intersting to see.

i ask ,
do you like to fly?
do you like to sing?
but more importantly do you know what love is?

looking at me so suprise like they knew im wrong..
looking at the  sky and seeing my name colored in blue ,which i cant deny..

THE SKY IS CALLING MY NAME ,cant you hear?
making noises ,pretending that im not scared.

telling me dont ignore your love inside ,dont be scared because ....--

scared of what ?
scared of love ,she answers in her deep voice.

im scared of not being with someone i love ,not a man ,,,but a person that i respect and admire..

   Stop denying what you have,this is your talent ..
that you are sent to use...

     for a reason or two..


so dont be shy ,dont lie ,dont get away from something you truly want ,be yourself and you will never hurt anyone with your sweet little mind..


        THE SKY stops and saying ,dont you get it ,i see you every night and day sleeping or eating or even dreaming or even being  what you are  NOW..

A Friend's love says:
" If you ever need anything,
I'll be there."

True Love says:
" You'll never need anything;
I'll be here."

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Rommance_Touch
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since 2004-05-07
Posts 97

1 posted 2004-05-09 05:45 AM


hi...how r u sweet??...nice work..especially u had emualate it by the nature wich made its so simple and nice also while yr talking the Sky and Birds its amazing job...But dont break yr heart and do what do u c it relflects a love name,dont hide yr love inside its so bad to do, relase it...Hope to hear a nice news soon.
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