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Censored
Member

since 2004-04-11

Posts 86

0 posted 2004-05-04 09:27 PM

I close my door yet again,
to drown out the curses and screams
the tears and 'i hate yous'
It's a familar scene,
In an act I hate.
My backs to the wall now, as I sit here in the corner.
I'm listening to this again...
Its going in one ear
and out the other, Because...
I've seen this play, a thousand times
It's something I just can't swallow.
I just close my eyes
and pretend like
I've never cried.

Lexy
Senior Member

since 2003-01-28

Posts 1038
California

1 posted 2004-05-04 10:21 PM

the last part was the only part that really hit me as something great as far as creativity is concerned.
I loved that.
Its short, the rest is just kind of telling us whats going on in a blah sort of way, not real intigue until the end.

Jenabou
Member

since 2000-06-13

Posts 215
Oklahoma/Nova Scotia Canada/USA

2 posted 2004-05-04 11:13 PM

this poem was short, but powerful.
very good

*for someone who's used to heartache,losing it all was just a matter of time*
Be kind,for everyone you meet is fighting a harder battle

*Alli4000*

Member Elite

since 2004-03-21

Posts 3188
The World of Poetry

3 posted 2004-05-05 06:41 PM

I totally agree with lexy and jenabou...great job....very powerful..

~Alli~

blackandwhitehorizon
Member

since 2003-05-05

Posts 183
an akward state of mind

4 posted 2004-05-05 08:18 PM

i like this

"love is but a song we sing and fear's the way we die"

sweet_cute_palestinian04
Member

since 2004-04-11

Posts 418
Earth

5 posted 2004-05-05 09:24 PM

LOLOL...I LOVE IT KEEP UP THE GRETA WORK SIS..lovezz

Censored
Member

since 2004-04-11

Posts 86

6 posted 2004-05-05 10:15 PM

Thanks

Don_Juan
Member

since 2004-04-08

Posts 252
Far from where I am going

7 posted 2004-05-05 10:24 PM

this poem is nothing short of powerful. it seems your making a fan out of me. keep writing

nice use of muffin

kissa~rachelle
Senior Member

since 2003-11-27

Posts 988
nowhere special

8 posted 2004-05-06 05:15 PM

Oh wow, i loved this. Very amazing write. I could feelyour emotion in this, and the ending was amazing. You shouldnt have to go
through stuff like this.. if this happened to you personnely, i am so sorry. I am going
to pretend like i didnt cry when i read this!

I want a relationship i can finally sink my teeth into.~ Alexander Sterling

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