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Teen Poetry #7

touchy

Godsend_1
Member

since 2001-04-19

Posts 247
great state of illinois

0 posted 2004-04-29 12:18 PM

if I hug you it means i love you
if I touch you it means I care
if I put my head on your shoulder I trust you
if I Put my arm around you I protect you

all these thinigs I mean sincerly
and as strongly as the last words
of a dying man

if you hug me it means you love me
if you touch me it means you care
if you put your head on my shoulder you trust me
if you put your arm around me you protect me

all these things you should mean sincerly
and as strongly as the last words
of a dying man

and while some people say I am touchy
I simply say I am loving

all that is said and all that is thought flows through the young

never_a_princess
Member

since 2001-06-09

Posts 82
Show Me the Money

1 posted 2004-04-29 12:30 PM

here it is: the mention of a dying man's last words. loved that.

kissa~rachelle
Senior Member

since 2003-11-27

Posts 988
nowhere special

2 posted 2004-04-29 04:36 PM

dido, I loved it. Very precious write. I'm saving this! If you dont mind? lol

I want a relationship i can finally sink my teeth into.~ Alexander Sterling

Godsend_1
Member

since 2001-04-19

Posts 247
great state of illinois

3 posted 2004-05-02 09:44 PM

please comment on this poem i will give you a dollar if you do :P just kidding but please comment anyway

all that is said and all that is thought flows through the young

[This message has been edited by Godsend_1 (05-03-2004 02:40 PM).]

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