Whispers in the wind (A burning fire)

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Whispers in the wind (A burning fire)

young_blood
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since 2003-09-19

Posts 1115
Indianapolis, IN

0 posted 2004-04-13 12:52 PM

Whispers in the wind (A burning fire)

Can you see this oil lamp breathe?
The burning fule's light inhales and leaves.
And the darkness cannot understand the light
Because of loving, but hatful couple's strife.
As the fertile glow waxes and wanes
The shadows grow through dusty window panes.
And these starry lights embrace good nights
As we close the distance between our eyes.
The best impressions last almost forever
Still fond in my heart, us, together.
This pain in my chest perfects your feelings,
Grasping for your hand and quietly pleading,
"Not tonight or tomorrow, please take note
Of the things mouth has said and hand has wrote."
Glance at the lamp in the corner again
I whisper softly to put the light to an end.
Goodnight my love...

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

1 posted 2004-04-13 08:46 PM

Alex~
This is just such a lovely read~

'The best impressions last almost forever'

Indeed they do~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

noles1@totcon.com

River
Senior Member

since 2003-09-16

Posts 627
my own little world

2 posted 2004-04-13 11:39 PM

awww...I agree with Marge, this is beautiful, i love it! *adds to library* it's so soft and has really good imagery. good job! =)

- River

sleep my precious slumber

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