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Two of a Kind |
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kissa~rachelle Senior Member
since 2003-11-27
Posts 988nowhere special |
You said that we were two of a kind, forever my best friend. You said you'd always be there for me, until the very end. You always told me everything, even if i didnt wanna know. Things that cut me deeper, than any knife could go. You knew how much i loved him, and you did it anyway, not caring about my feelings, just taking him away. Eevn though you saw, the tears streaming down my face. you acted like what you did was right, that what you said wasnt out of place. You told me it was jsut a dare, that it wasnt a big deal, at that i knew, that our friendship was never real. He was my whole world, He was everything to me. i loved him with everything i had. Everything you've taken away from me. ~kissa~ I want a relationship i can finally sink my teeth into.~ Alexander Sterling |
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sweet_cute_palestinian04 Member
since 2004-04-11
Posts 418Earth |
woooooooooooow wow wow....i loved it keep it up,it really touched the bottom of my heart deeper and deeper..i really enjoyed it keep writtin and i promise you ,you will be the number 1 of all your friends just be strong and dont ever make any-1 hurt you like they hurted me..so for the people you love be stronggggggggggggggg and stay strong for life and forever ....::^LOVE^:: |
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UnsilencedWords666 Member
since 2003-11-19
Posts 63Broken Memories & Falling Tears |
This was really good; I had a so called bestfriend of mine fool around with my bf for four months before I caught them in the act...and I know how it feels to be hurt from somthign like this...Very truthful write...keep up the hella impressive work... *~*nessa bear*~* You can’t choose who you are Only what you will be Why can't you choose To let me be me...*~*Nessa Bear*~* |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
I can't believe that your friend would do that to you (if this is written from a first-hand experience)!!!!!! But don't worry you'll move on and you're too good for her anyway. Great write, like always. I love your poems! ~Alli~ |
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Fleur Member
since 2004-04-09
Posts 103 |
That is absolutely incredible, girl! It's amazing... That's what my friend did to me too... Well, keep up the excellent work! |
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kissa~rachelle Senior Member
since 2003-11-27
Posts 988nowhere special |
Thanks 4 the comments guys. I appreciate it. This was written from a first hand experience, that is still going on. They just started to go out today.... yea. "just a dare" my a**. Sorry. Like i said, thanks 4 the comments. I want a relationship i can finally sink my teeth into.~ Alexander Sterling |
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Deep_Inside Member
since 2002-02-14
Posts 377i can't stop hiding |
This was just awesome the first two stanzas grabbed me(there my fave.  )and the rest of the poem was just grate...the subject in this poem is harsh but grate job on expressing them...keep writingwhen you live you begin to die |
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skyshine 
since 2002-02-07
Posts 3058Beneath the northern stars |
I can't believe that some people aren't what they say they are....although Heaven knows it shouldn't surprise me by now. ~sky Hold on, if you feel like letting go |
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moonguardian2004 Member
since 2002-12-01
Posts 64MA, USA |
Hey great write. Like what was said above. You are way to good for her. Stick with your true friends who would never dream of hurting you like that. Its great that you have your writing talent to help you express your emotions. Smile!! ~*To be a star, you must shine your own light, follow your own path and don't worry about the darkness for that is when stars shine oh so bright !~ |
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