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Teen Poetry #7

Ich Liebe Duch. Du Hasst Mich.

Ixxi
Member

since 2004-01-02

Posts 77
England

0 posted 2004-04-11 11:52 AM

Forgotten, but not gone
I'm a punchline, and life is a joke
Forgotten the mistakes I made
And the promises I broke

I maybe think I love you
It's killing me from inside
Then I ruined our friendship
I have no place to hide

I will walk across the sun
And burn until your own skin heals
Mark myself 'You Are The One'
And die when the wound seals.

"Where paper cuts, and bloody hands, In the middle, they will meet"
- Funeral For A Friend

Fleur
Member

since 2004-04-09

Posts 103

1 posted 2004-04-12 08:47 AM

Why? Because that's how I feel right now... Ready to die..

sweet_cute_palestinian04
Member

since 2004-04-11

Posts 418
Earth

2 posted 2004-04-12 12:19 PM

I love your poem..it really touched my heart..the truth is i once was hurt and still am but i dont like to show it ..because each time i think about it it just killls me the most...i really love it ..keep it upp ...

::^LOVE^::

Spine Grinder
Senior Member

since 2000-10-28

Posts 1127
Standing In Silence...

3 posted 2004-04-13 08:14 AM

This was good. I especially liked the last stanza. Well done. I also liked the title lol.

"I...I bleed...For no one..but myself...For me and no one else!"~ MudVaYne

UnsilencedWords666
Member

since 2003-11-19

Posts 63
Broken Memories & Falling Tears

4 posted 2004-04-13 06:02 PM

I liked it...from the title it really wasn't what I was expecting...but no the less it was hella great...

*~*nessa bear*~*

You can’t choose who you are Only what you will be Why can't you choose To let me be me...*~*Nessa Bear*~*

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