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Mad_Hatter
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0 posted 2004-07-27 09:22 PM


A vapour sting
As I am surging free
Slipping through some ocean crack
What am I to see, in the becoming?
I wear my name through my fingers
Tilting on the vapours wing

A snuck intrusion at the base of my back
I’m growing out and spreading in
Success is resting on a distant ridge
The echo’s of the flies blowing through the wind
The voices coming, the voices coming
Although I cannot break this skin

I have to rest myself on tortured ground
As the currents give and sway
Formaldehyde in vision
And I cannot form a bruise
Sitting on the distant sun
I mustn’t lay this loose

I break myself before the noon
The distant coming soon
Boys of vision
Girls of screams
We slip about the centre
Breaking in the dream…


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~K~
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1 posted 2004-07-28 12:09 PM


Awesome. You give dark poetry a good name.
Mad_Hatter
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2 posted 2004-07-28 01:59 PM


THank you
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