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Destinys_Fallen_Angel
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since 2004-05-06
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0 posted 2004-06-16 01:23 AM


my cries echo through the night
The pain or your intrusion tears my small body
Tears flow down my red cheeks

My hands claw at your body
I try to push you off me
But your vice like grip holds me to your sweaty body

Struggle as I might
I cant break free
Your weight pins me down

after you've had your way
you watch me shower as i try
to wash away your stench

You call me good girl and pat my head
You kiss my cheek and tuck me in
you violate me and send me back to bed

How I hate you
For the pain you cause me
How I wish to be free
From you and your kind


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[This message has been edited by Destinys_Fallen_Angel (06-17-2004 02:11 AM).]

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junemac
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since 2003-04-24
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1 posted 2004-06-17 03:26 PM


So very sad and so very common. A terrible situation and you cover it well in this poe. Thank you for sharing such a difficult subject. If this is a personal experience, I wan to let you know that I think you have great courage.
Hugs from June x

Destinys_Fallen_Angel
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2 posted 2004-07-03 09:22 PM


Thank you soo much for you feedback it is greatly appreciated

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3 posted 2004-07-12 03:42 PM


Is this based on an actual event?  If so, this is what poetry is all about.  I would also urge to seek help help, you don't have to live with the pain forever.
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