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devina
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0 posted 2003-09-23 03:50 PM



The infectiousness
of flesh reborn-
Stinging sweet
in human form,
Flailing wild
in midnight breeze-
Seizing scorn
oh- priced defeat...

To wear you warm
upon my bone-
Rubied decision,
wrap me "home"...
Cradle supple,
Dub me young
Taste me sweet-
upon the tongue...

Give in not-
to my beg easy,
Sculpt harsh lines
~~Divinity~~
Infect. Infect-
my mirror show,
Neglect. Neglect-
this ivory bone...

Protrude in mock
of certainty-
Oh- dub me Young...
Eternally.

Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...



© Copyright 2003 Tanya Nicole Bustamante - All Rights Reserved
Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2003-09-23 04:26 PM


HeyThereGirlieGirl~
I 'see' you ...

You still got the talent going on~
Love you ... hope all is well~
E me .. I've lost yours~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
   noles1@totcon.com     

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2 posted 2003-09-24 02:12 AM


Hey kitten!

Still conjuring the greedy need I see.

You haven't lost your touch, m'lovie.

Wonderful reading your enchantments again.


wranx
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3 posted 2003-09-25 12:00 PM


"Protrude in mock
of certainty-
Oh- dub me Young...
Eternally."

Here, here!

Always good to read your words deTanya.
But, alas, it's never enough (greedy me)

Hopefully, I'll soon get my own pen kick-started.

Ed


vlraynes
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4 posted 2003-09-25 04:31 AM



"Give in not-
to my beg easy,
Sculpt harsh lines
~~Divinity~~
Infect. Infect-
my mirror show,
Neglect. Neglect-
this ivory bone...

Protrude in mock
of certainty-
Oh- dub me Young...
Eternally."



This is very cool stuff, Tanya.  
I'm liking it lots.

Good to see you posting...

When the power of love overcomes the
love of power the world will know peace.
-Jimi Hendrix

coyote
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5 posted 2003-09-26 08:17 AM


Profoundly young, yet written in an ancient  style I haven't heard for many seasons.

Thanks,
coyote


littlewing
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6 posted 2003-09-27 01:18 PM


Tanya -

To wear you warm
upon my bone-
Rubied decision,
wrap me "home"...
Cradle supple,
Dub me young
Taste me sweet-
upon the tongue...

You will always be what you are
a beauty indeed
inside and out
xxoo

EagleOne
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Between a laugh and a tear...
7 posted 2003-10-24 05:38 AM


It is impossible not to “feel” your words. Always a treat to read you, take care!

We live an' learn from our mistakes
The deepest cuts are healed by faith
~ All Fired Up, P.Giraldo, M.Grombacher & K.Tolhurst

RSEvans
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8 posted 2003-12-16 08:11 PM


since when?  You will always be younger than me,duh!  Good to see some things only improve with age, dearest poetess.

And when you remember me...remember my deeds and not my words.

devina
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9 posted 2003-12-21 06:03 AM


gasp. sigh. *thump* (and maybe a flutter) It has been too long lovie...ck your mail, I've missed you somethen terrible!!

**big wet ones Robbie**

Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...



RSEvans
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10 posted 2003-12-22 07:06 PM


same to you T and I hope to see MORE of you now that you know where to find me.  Still miss my morning coffee with ya
Sven
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11 posted 2003-12-22 09:33 PM


hey now. . . how did I miss this one??  

done with the style that only you have my friend. . .

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I am tired . . .

passing shadows
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12 posted 2004-02-23 03:01 AM


nice...enjoyed this
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