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Dark Poetry #4

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RSEvans
Senior Member

since 1999-10-23

Posts 1147
Tulsa, OK, USA

0 posted 2003-12-16 08:30 PM

Sleep comes for all
And calls from grave,
For those who stall
And cannot be saved.
It is the nature known
To all who breathe
That from our own
We all must leave.
Fight not the calling
Of nature's way,
Though contend to stalling
Another day.
Be not afraid
Nor filled with doubt
Nor overstayed
When time runs out.
Know I'll be around,
When life has heaved
In the ground
My lifeless form leave.

And when you remember me...remember my deeds and not my words.

Unsure Poet
Junior Member

since 2003-12-11

Posts 10
Savannah, Georgia

1 posted 2003-12-16 11:51 PM

I really like this poem RSEvans. It is so powerful and well written. Great job.

devina
Member Elite

since 1999-10-28

Posts 3539
Cali

2 posted 2003-12-21 06:06 AM

And here you go with the manic depressant in you! Ha! lovely verse Rob...You can't imagine how long I've waited to see the dark side of you! Or was it the bedroom light? hmmm...have to think on that one eh?
Take care...*winks*
~T

Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...

RSEvans
Senior Member

since 1999-10-23

Posts 1147
Tulsa, OK, USA

3 posted 2003-12-22 04:31 PM

UP: much thanks

mistress D: Where have you been? My feet are cold.

Mad_Hatter
Member

since 2003-06-29

Posts 393
Canada

4 posted 2003-12-22 05:18 PM

Very nice poem, I enjyoed it alot, it flows very wonderfully.

devina
Member Elite

since 1999-10-28

Posts 3539
Cali

5 posted 2003-12-23 07:01 PM

so you need fuzzy socks, no??

Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...

RSEvans
Senior Member

since 1999-10-23

Posts 1147
Tulsa, OK, USA

6 posted 2003-12-23 07:28 PM

more coffee D....more coffee

River
Senior Member

since 2003-09-16

Posts 627
my own little world

7 posted 2003-12-25 03:11 PM

I liked this =)

- River

Love hurts as bad as it feels good.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

8 posted 2004-02-23 03:04 AM

well done

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