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darkstar
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since 2000-08-09
Posts 230
Port Richey, Fl, USA
0 posted 2004-03-17 05:50 PM

a window breaks
the wind rushes in
sweeps me off my feet

try to grasp
but only air
greets my oustretched hand

falling faster
glimpse of darkness
shadows dance across the walls

only embers
left to light
my descent into the abyss
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click1
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since 2003-03-25
Posts 152
usa
1 posted 2004-03-17 06:52 PM

Beautiful! and quite frightfull...as overwhelming emotions tend to be..well done!

Click
kissa~rachelle
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since 2003-11-27
Posts 988
nowhere special
2 posted 2004-03-17 06:58 PM

dido with click. I like this.

I want a relationship i can finally sink my teeth into.~ Alexander Sterling
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