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kissa~rachelle Senior Member
since 2003-11-27
Posts 988nowhere special |
Emotions flowing like a stream, always making me want to scream. Emptyness is all i am. I float through the darkness like a feather blown by the breeze, taking me away, following unknown dreams, Tearing me apart by the seams Crushing my beautiful world, full of all my fantasies. I am brought back to reality, things finally start to be clear. I start to see, there is nothing for me here. I hate this world, it is bitter and cold. everyone is expected to do everything they are told. They say we are free, but the reality is we are not. People get stabbed, and poeple get shot. its just another, everyday thing to us. nobody does anything about it, afraid they might make a fuss. This world is all wrong, nobody cares anymore. There is nothing left, no faith, no trust. There is no such thing as love, only lust. I can't stay in this darkening world, I am going back to mine, full of faeries and love and dogs howling at the moon. You should go there sometime. I am going back soon. ~Vampire Kisses  Tell me what you got from this! After i get a few posts, i will post what i meant with the two worlds and everything. I want a relationship i can finally sink my teeth into.~ Alexander Sterling |
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Hollow_Emptiness Senior Member
since 2004-02-01
Posts 715New Zealand |
Hmmmmm i liked it....yeah i liked it. My fave line was "Tearing me apart by the seams" "Why are my visions so unliving with dreams? And why do I no longer care?" - Stygian |
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eor Senior Member
since 2002-09-26
Posts 959blues & greys |
what i get from this is the real world dissapoints you so you go into your own world, wither fantasy, or written, but ti is a place for you to escape "So what befalls the flawless? |
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click1 Member
since 2003-03-25
Posts 152usa |
I see a jadded point of view...a person of experience..not all of them good..but able to express these views..and yet know some things (times)are still good and pure. "It has been my experience that people who have no vices have very few virtues." Abraham Lincoln Click |
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kissa~rachelle Senior Member
since 2003-11-27
Posts 988nowhere special |
I have two "worlds". One, the real one, that disgusts me sometimes. I know that it isnt always like everything i wrote in my poem, but someday... i fear that it will be,if nobody stops it, and i dont wanna be here IF it does come to that. My other "world", is full of what i want the world to be, what i dream to become, and what i dream for the world to become. "I can't stay in this darkening world, I am going back to mine, full of faeries and love and dogs howling at the moon. You should go there sometime. I am going back soon." This last stanza basically meant, that i want to be in my other world, and i want other poeple to see what its like there, and maybe.... I dont know, maybe make a difference in the Real World, maybe make it better. I want a relationship i can finally sink my teeth into.~ Alexander Sterling |
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