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Dark Poetry #4

It's over

Ladycat

Senior Member

since 1999-07-05

Posts 782
At the edge and a doorway,TX

0 posted 2004-01-17 06:27 AM

A glass falls to the floor
Women scream
Lights flicker
Drugs
Was that it?
Words become louder
Now a guy's voice
People start to cry
The room spins
The pain of it all
Thud...
Crash..
Spill..
And it is all over..
Is it all over?
Someone remind me cause I can't remember
Was this the day that I gave birth or the day that all the abuse started?

Ladycat

Dancing is the loftiest, the most moving, the most
beautiful of the arts, because it is no mere translation
or abstraction from life; IT IS LIFE I

Gothika_07
Member

since 2004-01-15

Posts 61
new zealand

1 posted 2004-01-17 03:05 PM

hey!
this was seriously kool.

hpe u keep on writin!

xxgothikaxx

darkness_witch
Senior Member

since 2003-12-03

Posts 516
Underneath

2 posted 2004-01-18 03:39 AM

woaaaah

settle down cat! this is hardcore!!!

very tense write.

love how u finished it... amazing how a question can sum up such an edgy poem

rock on

darkness

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